filtering through my curtain
you're the raindrops
on my windowpane
you're the soft green
of the grass
the wind blowing
in my hair
the love song on my
best days
and the poetry
on my sad days
you are the moon
that shines my path
the blanket that
keeps me warm at night
you surround me
as the air i breathe
so without you
i cannot live.
march 7, 2010
8.48 pm
8.48 pm
I have commented! Then it didn't appear lol D:. So making another comment. It has been a long time I haven't comment on blogger kekekke ^^'
ReplyDeleteI don't remember reading this! When I read this I imagine all the moments that you relate, raindrops on windowpane, sunlight filtering through my curtain, the moon that shine my path,soft green of the grass. OMG. How much is that person means to you. It so beautiful! I mean reading it and imagining it and relate it with the person you love, that person that is so important to you. It's ..wow. It's beautiful. Saya suruh Kak Harani (my colleague) baca, she said wahhh kawan awak ni orang puteh ke ? :P. She love it esp the part "you're the soft green of the grass"
So simple yet so beautiful <3. Write more ok ^^ <3
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ReplyDeleteehh twin yeke? I've never showed you this one ehh? Hmmm. Hahahaha apekah orang putih? Saye orang kuning. LOL. I'm happy she liked the poem though! (poem aku yg lain sure dia cannot read, tak censored kot :P)
Thank youuuuu <3